

All Peet ever wanted was a family. Peet refuses to give Wren to anyone else. However, at the end, he decides to give her up to save her, only because he loves her.
It’s finals week at Red Wind High in 1991. Peet Cooper, a scrawny and quirky orphan, finds a home in his beautiful girl-friend, Wren. They plan to go to college together, talk of marriage, and dream of having children.
Peet fumes with jealousy as Wren seems to fall for the new kid from New York, Simeon. In a misguided effort to stake his claim, Peet spends his college savings on an engagement ring, and nervously sings a song for her at the talent show, proposing in front of her classmates. Driving her home, Peet apologizes for embarrassing her, explaining he just got caught up in the moment.
Wren, however, blurts through tears that she’s pregnant. Knowing he hasn’t yet slept with Wren, Peet is heart-broken, refuses to listen, and accidentally drifts into oncoming traffic.

Peet is thrown from his comfort zone of despising and resenting Simeon, to working closely with him (and growing in friendship) in an effort to save Wren.
The entire story from here on out is Peet and Simeon painfully growing in a relationship in an effort to find Wren.
Simeon doesn’t love Wren, he loves shallow, pointless things. His arc is perhaps the opposite of Peets. Peet wants a family, and learns he only needs to love, not be loved. You lay down your life for those you love, no matter what.
Stakes: Wren and Simeon leave the coma world, saving all the children, while Peet is left alone, completely orphaned.
Once we know what Peet wants, how do we make it incredibly hard for him to achieve it.
Peet and Wren wake months later from a coma in an empty hospital at twilight. They discover a group of teenagers in hospital gowns. Strangely, Simeon is there, appearing to lead the group. Simeon, however, is not wearing a hospital gown.
Peet aligns with two dorky students claiming to be his friends: Preston (a 4-eyed nerd) and Gomar (who is clearly stoned, calling himself “Gomboysa”). Neither of them know of Wren’s whereabouts. Worse, Peet learns of the recent rapture of the grown-ups: the cops, teachers, and parents, have all vanished.
Ignoring the groups caution, Peet races alone from the hospital and through the surrounding woods to Wren’s house as the sun sets. Peet explores her ransacked estate in the woods, encountering a naked one-eyed woman, who viciously attacks Peet. Preston saves him, and together they flee the woods to the safety of the hospital.
Here, Peet meets several other students, including Simeon, who begin a rehearsed nightly routine: locking the doors, flipping a coin for night-watch, and hunkering down in sleeping bags in the cafeteria.
That night, Peet is horrified to find dozens of grown-ups smiling through the windows at the children. The one-eyed woman nocks quietly at the locked doors, while a cloaked entity combs her hair with his long fingers.
Peet learns of the town’s nightmarish reality: crazed adults have been appearing from the woods all Summer, kidnapping children in the dead of night, and taking them into the woods. Gomboysa’s younger brother, Gomgirlsa, was even kidnapped a week prior. Peet can’t help but think of Wren.
The next day, Peet and his friends save Gomtoddler fleeing from the woods. Tending to a bite wound on his belly, Gomtoddler informs Peet of the crazed adults’ nest, Blackfork Asylum, several miles through the fog of Neverwood, atop Blackfork Mountain. To his horror, Gomtoddler speaks a beautiful girl, Wren, locked in the attic of the asylum, and demonic entity, Dr. Smile.
The four friends commit to saving her and the other children from the crazed adults, mapping out a daring venture to Blackfork Asylum the following morning.
That evening, however, Gomtoddler begins acting bizarre, obsessively scratching his bite-wound, explaining that it “feels good”. While sleep-walking, Gomtoddler unlocks the doors for the crazed grown-ups, and all hell breaks loose. Every teenager, including Gomboyssa, is taken, while Peet, Simeon, Preston, and a now lucid Gomtoddler, escape into the hospital sewer system.

After a frightening journey through an adult-infested sewer system, Peet, Preston, and Gomtoddler emerge in Neverwood. Preston is immediately taken by an adult into the snow toward the faint silhouette of Blackfork Asylum atop an icee cliff.
On their journey through the woods to the cliff face, Gomtoddler’s behavior grows increasingly more bizarre, speaking in a deep voice, claiming to be “Richard”, and seeking the cloaked entity, called “Dr. Smile”. After climbing a cliff face, they arrive at Blackfork Asylum. In a high window, Wren screams to Peet, but is pulled into the shadows.
Just as Peet opens the front door, Dr. Smile and dozens of teens march in single file from the front door to the edge of a cliff. To Peet’s horror, Gomtoddler becomes entranced, and joins the line, coaxed over the edge by Dr. Smile.
Peet, however, creeps to the doorstep of Blackfork Asylum, and sneaks into a large hall.

PEET PRESTON
A scrawny, insecure 17 year-old. Although he is a talented pianist, he struggles with confidence, jealous of any guy that looks at Wren.
PRESTON PEET
Preston is a genius. Preston helps Peet better understand the mysterious world around him. Preston was Peet’s best friend and neighbor when they were 10, just before being diagnosed with leukemia and induced into a coma. He’s lived in the fragment ever since.
WREN DeSPRANGLE
Peet’s beautiful, charming girl-friend. Although she’s new to Red Wind High, she gets along with just about everyone, especially Duane. Wren genuinely loves Peet, especially the music he plays.
GOMAR “GOMBOYSA” PIT
He calls himself “Gomboysa”. Obsessed with parkour, he’s able to climb and jump over just about anything. The twin brother of Gomgirlsa.
SIMEON SMILE
Simeon’s a dick, but everyone thinks he’s hilarious. He’s the opposite of Peet: suave, funny, and wealthy. He’s the school quarter-back, and seems to have caught Wren’s eye. Father of Wren’s child. Simeon mysteriously enters The Fragment, and Peet and him learn to bond. Ultimately, Peet allows Simeon to save Wren, both story arcs fulfilled.
GOMA “GOMGIRLSA” PIT
Called “Gomgirlsa” by her twin brother Gomboysa. Recently taken, but returned to the hospital. Although she reveals secrets to the group about Blackfork, she also opens the doors for the adults in a fit of insanity due to a bite.
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